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arf ginga densetsu weed fanart.

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:icone1n:
aieeeeeee
cuteness <3

what are they doing in the snow? lost?

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i believe that if anything is worth doing, it would have been done already.
:iconrocketgal:
they are FILLED WITH BELIEF IN THEMSELVES

and hope

hope for the future


>.>

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five thousand two hundred and thirty nine ants, Ed. Pick them up! PICK THEM UP!
:iconchatseh:
PUPPY PUPPY ^___^

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Pokémon and Keroro Gunsou fan and just your general mental screwup.
:icone1n:
in other words, they're lost =D

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i believe that if anything is worth doing, it would have been done already.
:iconcosmicdebris:
Aw, cute doggies. ^^

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Two natures beat within my breast;
One is foul, one is blessed;
The one I love, the one I hate;
the one I feed will dominate.
:iconstrangeonepirate:
Awww. Beautiful semirealism, them's some cute doggies x3.

I'd give advanced critique if I could, but I can't find much wrong with it D8.

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~FrankyXRobinClub You know you wanna >:3
:iconblackpurplewolf:
wow. i just finished watching that series~<3 This is a nice style. well done :D

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"Nobody springs from the womb already able to draw. Drawing enjoyment and success is conceived by the 'idea' of possibility, instigated by choice, and developed by practice, not talent" - Bridget Woods

It takes 90% effort, 10(or less) % talent
:iconmissremington:
Wow, you made especially Weed look much much better then he is in the show :D.
The white spots above his eyes looked in the original version like bumps.

Oh, advanced critiqzue encouraged?
Wait, Iīll do a quick overpaint:
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- I tried to make the figures of the dogs easier readable for the viewer, putting contrast to the white dogs but (I forgot the names D:), putting a shadow underneath the orange dogs belly and fixing Weeds legs.
- there are some small anatomy flaws, weeds hindleg was in the wrong perspective and the white dog had no breast.
- The biggest flaw in this pic are the eyes. Somehow Weed looks cute but at the same time like a puppet whose eyes are sewed on without care. The reflections make him look like heīs crosseyed.
The dogs are missing good head constructions, Weeds ears suggest that his head is leaned to the left but his muzzles looks like the head is straight. I donīt understand the white dogs head :/.
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Please note some other things:
-The reflections in the dogs eyes come from 3 different sides. Where does your light come from?
- the orange dog and the white dog have very similair looking front legs. Repetitions donīt look good in a style where you exaggerate the individual characteristics.
- the noses and eyes are solid black. This makes them look flat (same for pure white). You could work subtle with different shades of dark grey.

Sorry for my AWESOME english :lick:


The style in this pic is wonderful, I really like the way you used it :).
Oh, and I really like your confidend and sloppy lines in your other pictures.
:icondensetsu-kario:
ooo i luv it

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